lunes, 24 de septiembre de 2012

6th Year Students Wrote About People They Admire


A person I admire.

I'm going to write about a friend, about my best friend. He is called Alejandro. He is fifteen and he lives a little far from my house, in Parque Patricios. He goes to Ramón Falcón school, but in first and second year, he went to Confederación Suiza school (that's where I go now and that's the reason why I know him). He goes to school in the morning, so in the afternoon he sleeps if he wants (I envy him!), and in his free time, he plays videogames or goes to play a football match with friends, he's very good at playing football!
He's got two dogs, but I don't know why I'm writing this.
He likes listening to all kinds of music, but he hates some genres. He likes playing football. He hates being (negatively) compared with anyone.
His appearance? He has short, black hair and brown eyes. He is a little shorter than me (more or less 8 cm.) and he is neither thin nor fat. (He’s average; I can't find a word for that hahaha). He's very cheerful and he keeps secrets very well. I admire him very much because he has changed my point of view about friendship and now, I think I see friendship in another way which is better, thanks to him. He is always happy and every time we meet, I tell him a lot of things that happened during the week and I don't worry about what I tell him because I feel I can trust him everything.  and say all stupid things I say weekly (or daily ), and that's another reason why I admire him, and he always listens to me when I need to tell him a problem.
I think my best friend isn't very popular (that's not necessary no?), and he likes spending time with his family, he almost never argues with someone in his family.

Andres Almada 6th B

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Describing a person

I’m going to talk about the course tutor I had in my previous school, Santa Rosa for three years. His name was Leandro Sirito. We all called him by his surname, Sirito. I haven’t seen him for three months but I remember that he lived very far away from the school. Besides being tutor he was a religion teacher. I don’t know what he is doing now that my school has closed. I hope that he has been  able to find another job.
Sirito has got a round face, brown eyes and short brown hair. He’s got a large nose and a big chin. He’s quite tall, very thin but he isn’t very good-looking. He is in his early thirties but he looks younger.
Sirito was very popular in my previous school, everybody knew who he was, and he was very helpful, especially when we told him our problems. He always listened to all of them and was very honest. He was a person you could trust on, very reliable. He got on with every one, he was very hard-working and got angry when someone did something wrong. When you felt down he always made you laugh. He didn’t tell much about his life, he was very reserved. The only thing we knew was that he had a girl friend but he never talked about her.
I miss him because not only was he my tutor and teacher, but also a friend. He was and still is a person I admire.

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A person I admire.

I'm going to write about a friend, about my best friend. He is called Alejandro. He is fifteen and he lives a little far from my house, in Parque Patricios. He goes to Ramón Falcón school, but in first and second year, he went to Confederación Suiza school (that's where I go now and that's the reason why I know him). He goes to school in the morning, so in the afternoon he sleeps if he wants (I envy him!), and in his free time, he plays videogames or goes to play a football match with friends, he's very good at playing football!
He's got two dogs, but I don't know why I'm writing this.
He likes listening to all kinds of music, but he hates some genres. He likes playing football. He hates being (negatively) compared with anyone.
His appearance? He has short, black hair and brown eyes. He is a little shorter than me (more or less 8 cm.) and he is neither thin nor fat. (He’s average; I can't find a word for that hahaha). He's very cheerful and he keeps secrets very well. I admire him very much because he has changed my point of view about friendship and now, I think I see friendship in another way which is better, thanks to him. He is always happy and every time we meet, I tell him a lot of things that happened during the week and I don't worry about what I tell him because I feel I can trust him everything.  and say all stupid things I say weekly (or daily ), and that's another reason why I admire him, and he always listens to me when I need to tell him a problem.
I think my best friend isn't very popular (that's not necessary no?), and he likes spending time with his family, he almost never argues with someone in his family.

Andres Almada 6th B

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A special person

     OK, I didn’t think too much about the person who I’m going to write. I think that she is the best person I’ve ever met in my life. Well, we know that nobody is perfect, but she is near to that. She is Carolina.
  I met her in a concert, last year, on May 29th. Juan and I were waiting for the concert on the queue when she appeared. We were with other friends too. I was surprised because of her beauty, so I tried to talk with her. And I did it well. We talked a lot and, after the concert, we continued talking. And we never stopped, we continued in contact and we became very good friends, I remember that moment with a smile.
  Well, let’s talk about her, her family, her life…she is nineteen years old, and she lives in Ramos Mejía, with her mother. Her father…well, her father is disappeared. I know that he had a problem with them and that’s all. Someday I will ask her about him, but not now.
  She loves art. She spends a lot of time drawing and painting, and it’s amazing to see how she reproduces her feelings in the canvas.
  Talking about animals, she loves cats. She has two cats, but she spends a lot of time with one of them, with the male. She always tries to help abandoned animals.
  And now, let’s talk about basketball, a sport she loves. She used to play basketball in a club but now she is very busy with the university and her job.
  She likes watching movies at night. I sometimes go to her house and spend all the night watching movies and talking about our lives. We usually go to Starbucks café when she comes here, to Caballito.
  Let’s describe her physically. She has long, red hair (a week ago she was blond!) and light blue eyes. It’s like looking at the sky when you look into her eyes, believe me. She is quite short and really strong! I think that she is beautiful, as I said.
  Well, about her character...she is really sociable and cheerful. She is cold too; it’s very difficult for her to show her feelings if it is now drawing, but when she does, she can be the sweetest person you would ever know. I was lucky to be in some of her “expressive” moments. She is very popular because of her “crazy” personality. She is serious only when it’s necessary, so most of the time she is really funny. She always listens to your problems, to your life, to every detail, you can trust on her because she would never fail.
  Well, I could continue writing about her but this text will be very long. My conclusion is simple: I can’t live without her now. I ´ve learned a lot of things about life with her, we had a lot of memorable moments and now she is like an axis in my life. It’s not necessary to say that I love her, I think.

Facundo Almada. 6th B

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A person I admire

Taylor Swift was born in Pennsylvania on December  13th, 1989. She makes pop, pop rock and especially country music. She is a song writer and she also sings. Her career as a singer started in 2006 with her first album “Taylor Swift” which had “Our song” and other hits. She lives in Nashville with her boyfriend Conor Kennedy, Robert F. Kennedy Jr’s son. She is ecologist and likes playing the guitar.
Taylor has got blonde curly hair and blue eyes. She is thin and quite tall.
She hardly ever wears make up, she likes looking natural. She is girly and particularly cute. She has an 80’s bohemian style such as her BFF Dianna Agron from GLEE.
Taylor is known for making songs about her past relationships, for example: she wrote her new hit “We are never ever ever getting back together” after Joe Jonas called her back. She also writes about friendship, being a teenager girl and sad moments in her life. Her icon is a heart, something she makes with her hands while she sings for feeling connected with fans. I personally love Swiftie’s hearts.
Abril Seminario 6th B

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The person I admire

My mother is medium height, she looks very pretty, and she has dark brown hair with friendly brown eyes. She always manages to look well-dressed. The first reason why I admire her is that she teaches me from her experience. The second reason is that she takes cares of her children first, and then she takes cares of herself. Taking care of a person is not easy, and taking care of yourself at the same time is even harder. In conclusion I admire my mother because she works so hard for our family and for my best. When I grow up I will take care of her the way she does with me right now.  

Micaela Montenegro 6th B 



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